The main good point that were repeated was that our production included a variety of shots which match the criteria within the brief.We were also told that our POV and handheld shots were very effective and relevant hence the title ''the stalker''.
The titles were suitable and innovative as the typography of the titles were good.You could see the shots which were meant to be following after the titles came up, this conveys Cassie being followed.
Bad Points
We received many suggestions on how to improve our draft, we need to include pathetic fallacy as all our locations are shot in daytime where it is too light and unconventional for a thriller. This means we have to re film at night where it is darker which will add a scary effect.We also need to cut down the number of zooms as it makes the production loose its intensity, the more cuts used the more we will be able to get the audience on the edge of their seats.
Targets
-To re film the section where Cassie is followed in twilight to give the opening sequence a more scary effect. This allows us to follow the conventions of a thriller
-To cut quicker scenes and shots to create more suspense
-Re film the shot where Cassie is crying as we need to put emphasis on the tear drop
-Make the connection between why she is crying when looking at the baby pictures. (The class didn't see flashback)
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